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Need help for checking English text
« on: August 27, 2012, 09:21:38 AM »

Hello,

Now i`m working on English version of my progect and need some help.

Can anyone check this text:

"Clark - the only one man on a distant planet where he worked as a serving engineer on the automatic extraction plant. Having spent six months alone, he hopes to receive a considerable salary, and will spend on the treatment of seriously ill wife. But one day he discovers that he is not alone in this planet and begins to fear for his life."

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Re: Need help for checking English text
« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2012, 09:57:01 PM »

"Clark - the only man on a distant planet where he works as a serving engineer on the automatic extraction plant. Having spent six months alone, he hopes to receive a considerable salary, that he will spend on the treatment of his seriously ill wife. But one day, he discovers he is not alone on this planet and begins to fear for his life."
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